You Named me What?!

Posted by #R. Ann Siracusa

WHICH FICTIONAL CHARACTERS STAND OUT IN YOUR MEMORY?

Think about it!. There will be certain ones from movies, TV, books, video games and so on that always come to mind. Now think about the names of these characters. Is the name part of the reason you remember the character? Does the name fit the personality of the character? Would Scarlet O'Hara be as memorable if her name had been Judy Smith?

CHARACTER NAMES DO MATTER

There's a plethora of advice available on naming fictional characters. All sources seem to agree that choosing character names is an important part of structuring a novel. The name is an important part of the fictional person's character just as your name is part of who you are.

Character names do matter, and bestowing them can be as stressful as naming your baby.  In fact, in a way you are naming your baby. You are breathing life into a character and creating a new being.

Some perfectly good names can be poor choices for your novel, or they may be fine but not as fitting as they could be. The author doesn't really know all the ins-and-outs until the character begins to speak, take actions, and make decisions during the course of the first several chapters.

WHO REALLY NAMES YOUR CHARACTERS?

Jennifer Moss writes that authors often make the mistake of thinking they are responsible for naming the characters. But in the fictional world, just as it is in the real world, it is the character's parents who choose the name. Take that into consideration.

WHERE TO GET IDEAS FOR NAMES

Be observant, listen, and write down ideas. Inspiration for names are all around us. I keep a list of interesting names I run onto. Eventually, a character and circumstance will show up that is appropriate for the name.

Author Dan Schmidt suggests starting with people you know either because of their interesting names or characteristics. Get a map and look at names of towns, cities, rivers, streets. Pay attention to movie credits and products. When he wrote "Playa Perdida" he named one of the characters Charlotte Pipe after a length of PVC tubing he saw in a lumberyard in North Carolina.

His approach is to write first names and last names on separate index cards, so later you want match them up for a specific fictional character. 

  

RULES OF THUMB FOR NAMING CHARACTERS

Most of the many articles and books I reviewed give "Rules of Thumb" for naming characters which are substantially the same. Do's and Don’ts are essentially two sides of the same coin; it all depends on how you word the sentence. I've limited the suggestion to those I believe are most important.

Thumbs Up Do's 

● Keep names short and pronounceable, even in Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Historicals.

Avoid character and place names that are awkward to read or pronounce. 

Even if readers don't say the names aloud, they still pronounce them in their heads. Some awkward names cannot be avoided because you're using them in historical context, and scenes set in one-of-a-kind locations that are vital to the story but happen to have clunky names. Give them nicknames or shortened versions.

● Think about your character's physical appearance, ethnicity, personality, profession, interests, social status, and backstory.

Names should suit the character. Unlike Parents naming a new baby, authors have the advantage of making the character's features and personality whatever they want to fit the story.

● Make the name appropriate for the year and location when named.  

Take into account the names used at the time in history this character was named by the parents, in the context of the location. Take into account the character's ethnicity and national origin

● Speak the name aloud

Thumbs Down Watch-Out-Fors

In my opinion, there are no specific Don’ts. Therefore, I characterize these rules of thumb as "Watch-Out-Fors". Be aware, think about the name, and make an informed decision.

● Watch out for one character with many names. 

Because the author knows the character, he can read the manuscript many times and not see any problem with multiple names. In reality, we often use different names under different circumstances, or different people refer to the same person by another name or nickname.

In real life, a person named Manfred Carlyle McDonald, who is a lieutenant in the military and is also a medical doctor, could be referred to as Mr. McDonald, Doctor MacDonald, Lieutenant McDonald, McDonald, Manny, Mac, Fred, or all of those.

In fiction, the reader tends to associate the character with the name first used to introduce him. When that same character shows up again, sometimes many pages later, and is referred to by another name, it can be confusing.

● Watch out for many character with similar names.  

Authors are smart enough to figure out that two characters shouldn't have the same name. The only exception I can think of would be a child named after a parent, but that would have to be necessary for the storyline.

A more frequent problem results when two or more characters have names that begin with the same letter [Sam and Sydney] or same sound [Craig and Greg]. This is particularly confusing it the two characters spend a lot of time together.

● Avoid famous names
Unless your novel is the fictionalized version of a real event that involves a famous person, famous names are distracting and focus the reader's attention on the famous character [real or fictional] and pulls the reader out of the story. Plus, using a real name may have legal consequences. Even if not using the full name, people will associate characteristics with the famous character and prejudge the character. It can work as a plot device, or if the parents had a reason for naming their child after someone famous.

While Princess Diana may be a perfectly fine name for a character in a fantasy, using it will evoke images of the Princess Diana of our world and distract the reader.

● Avoid trends, overly strange names, and androgynous names. Sometimes names are trendy, particularly those of characters in current movies, TV, video games, etc. Those often become overused.

You want names readers accept and feel comfortable with, even though "cute" spellings exist, particularly today. Watch out for names that could be either gender, unless there is a specific and explained reason at the beginning.

NAMES CAN BE CHANGED

Computers make changing a character's name somewhat easy, but once an author starts using a name, it's often hard to get rid of it. But if it doesn't work, or has some unforeseen connotation you don't want, ditch it! You are not really killing your children.

The caution I would add is to use "find and replace" for all references, including nicknames. Remember Manfred Carlyle McDonald, who might be referred to as Mr. McDonald, Doctor MacDonald, Lieutenant McDonald, McDonald, Manny, Mac, or Fred.

Don't be afraid to change the character's name if it doesn't work, just be careful when you do it.

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Used Book Stores and Authors...What's the Bottom Line? #RB4U @melissa_keir

Used Book Stores and Authors...What's the Bottom Line?

Hello and welcome back to another month with me and your host blogger. I'm here each and every 9th day of the month, sharing about writing, books and life in general.

This week, I'm up North (in the thumb area of Michigan) enjoying some time with my husband in our silver bullet trailer. June in Port Austin is a quiet time. The weather alternates from chilly to warm but Lake Huron is too cold for swimming, so I'm relaxing with some of my favorite nature's sounds-waves.



But a girl can't survive on nature alone...so we have done a little exploring in town. The small neighboring town of Caseville has a used book store and I had to stop!

Have you ever been in a used book store before? They are a treat. Visually, it's like trying to fit a million books into a 3' by 5' section. Piles are everywhere. Hardcover books, paperbacks...children's books, biographies and cookbooks fill the shelves. There's a book for everyone!


Prices are good as well. You can get a used book for anywhere from $0.50 to $5.00 and up depending on hardcover or paperback. Among the aisles, you might find an original paperback of your favorite author or the last book in the series you need. Some stores even carry a few new books as well. 

One of the complaints authors (and publishers) have with used book stores is that the author doesn't make money from any sales of used books. If I buy a book at the local B&N, a portion of the sale goes back to the author. However, if I buy a book at the local used book store, that money only stays with the owner of the store. Is it fair?

Fair doesn't really have anything to do with it. Unless the book was stolen and sold illegally, the author has already received royalties on it. It's like buying a used car or clothes from Goodwill, those proceeds aren't going to go back to Ford or Abercrombie. 

But on the plus side, maybe someone who hasn't heard of you, will pick up your book off the shelf at a deal price and be floored by your story and want to buy more, thereby guaranteeing you more sales!

With more and more businesses turning to online markets, the used book stores are also becoming more internet savvy. Amazon has a marketplace where you can purchase used books. In addition, there are other online stores such as Ebay. The same principle applies. Royalties don't go back to the author, even if the book is out of print and selling for hundreds of more dollars than the original price. :( Just think of it as the author being a master painter like Picasso. After all, I do think I'm worth it! :)

When my kids were little, we would visit a local used book store. I bought 10 books at a time and would let them "buy" them back after a week. This allowed me to get their discounted price. The owners watched my children grow up from babies to toddlers to young adults. And for a voracious reader, it was an inexpensive way for me to "find" new authors. I devoured the books and in turn shared the experiences with my own children who are book hoarders in their own right. Do you have a story of a local bookstore? Do you like to find new authors and fun reads? Check out your local used bookstores!

If you would like to check out my latest releases, One Night Behind Bars or Broken Vows, you can visit my webpage (www.melissakeir.com) or Amazon (https://www.amazon.com/Melissa-Keir/e/B0078TCJX2/)

One Night Behind Bars....
A Bride, Jail and the Man of her Dreams…

Instead of marrying the man of her dreams, bride-to-be Jeannie Hall spends the night behind bars accused of domestic terrorism. Her groom loses no time marrying someone else. As if this isn’t enough, when she’s cleared of the charges and released, she becomes the target of a vengeful person, and the stakes keep getting higher. 

Deputy Hank Walker knows the beautiful woman is innocent, but he was forced to do his duty. Determined to find out who set her up, he starts digging deeper and vows to protect the woman who had stolen his heart.

Master matchmaker Draikoh San arranges for Jeannie and Hank to have a night to remember, but when a killer comes after them, will the two lovebirds end up wearing body bags or wedding rings?

Broken Vows.....

Sometimes life doesn’t go as planned…. 
Rick and Julie Tyler are happily married ranchers who raise and train horses. 

When money becomes tight, Rick becomes a firefighter in order to make ends meet, but he’s forced to move out of state if he wants more money and a chance to become a station chief. 

Distance causes problems for the happy couple and turns their world upside down. When Julie puts her foot down, will Rick decide to make the right choice, or will their vows break?




Thank you for stopping by and I hope to see you next month on July 9th! Enjoy the rest of your month!

xoxo
Melissa Keir