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Thursday, September 6, 2012

Busy busy busy month for me!

I have two releases.

Claiming Magique - Book One of my Appointment with Pleasure series, was just released by Ellora's Cave on August 31. It's an erotic contemporary.

On September 25, Illicit Desire - Book Two in my Outlawed Realm series for Samhain - will be released. It's an erotic paranormal.

I'm celebrating both romances all month!!

Here are the covers/blurbs on each, then read on to learn more about today's contest!!!


Blurb:

Book One – Appointment with Pleasure series


A man at the center of power…a woman who won’t be ruled…

They call her Magique.

Sought out by the District’s elite, she’s no ordinary call girl, deciding who will pleasure her for the evening. Her preference is for several men at once. Games of bondage and submission heighten her arousal and desire to have a strong male take her…to be adored.

Lobbyist Hunter Prescott was only looking for a good time, not a woman who unleashes a hunger so deep it changes his world. He won’t stop until Magique is his alone, a prisoner of his lust, powerless against his growing need for her body and heart.

With this man, resistance isn’t allowed. For this woman, he’ll create a world of sensual delight and yearning like none she’s known. Proving that only with trust and true surrender will she find unparalleled rapture.

More info and an excerpt: http://www.jasminejade.com/p-10319-claiming-magique.aspx



Blurb:

Pleasure that destroys all thought. Love that shatters all barriers.


Outlawed Realm, Book 2

Once a sex slave marked for termination, Lukan was miraculously liberated from E4’s Pleasure Palace, where E2’s fine, upstanding rulers secretly indulge their cravings for every imaginable vice. But freedom is not enough.

He left his heart behind with Arez. Within her fragrant, heated caress, he knew everything denied him. Rapture, contentment, tenderness…and love. Desperate to have her back in his arms, he embarks on a dangerous mission to deliver his untamed temptress from the certain death she does not know awaits her.

Within her velvet cage Arez knew only carnal submission and loneliness—until Lukan. But he has disappeared, and she senses something different in the way the supreme ruler is using her. Then, as if Lukan felt her longing for his strong arms and fevered kisses, he is there to sweep her from this twilight dimension to another.

But true freedom lies just out of his grasp. To reach the last portal—and their destiny—Lukan and Arez must first outwit an army of predators that hunt them. Human, subhuman…and monsters.

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Product Warnings

Features a lusty guy who makes Greek gods look wimpy, and a wanton woman who lives for scorching sex. When these two get it on, watch out, they ain’t playing at lust or love.
More info and an excerpt: http://store.samhainpublishing.com/illicit-desire-p-6991.html




CONTEST *** CONTEST *** CONTEST
 
Today, my Virtual Book Tour takes me to NJ Walter's site:
 
http://www.njwalters.com/
 
Here are the details -

One lucky commenter during this blog tour will have her choice of THREE of my following ebooks. The more places you visit me and the more comments you make ON THOSE SITES, the larger your chances are of winning as I’m choosing the winner randomly (picking the name out of a hat so to speak):

1. Adored – RWA award-winning; EPIC 2011 Finalist; 4 Stars RT

2. Deep, Dark, Delicious – EPIC 2011 Finalist; Holt Medallion Award of Merit

3. Lush Velvet Nights – EPIC 2011 Finalist; Golden Nib Award

4. In His Arms – SIX 5 Star Reviews; 4 Stars RT

5. Sensual Stranger – 2010 Book of the Year (erotic); 4 Stars RT

6. The Yearning – Top Ten Bestseller; Holt Medallion Award of Merit

7. Take Me Away – 2nd Place Winner, NEC RWA Contest

8. Unending Desire – Best Book Rating LASR

9. SiNN – Nominated for Book of the Week LASR

** Winner chosen at random. Winner chosen September 13








Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Fifty Shades of Cultural Attitudes



My original idea for this blog was more about the advertising aspect of having an entire magazine dedicated to the Fifty Shades media phenomenon. Put out, this month, by Topix Media Lab, it’s kind of a glitzy one-off that has the “feel” of “Cosmopolitan” when Helen Gurley Brown was running the show.

And then I saw the timeline on page 18 that identified a “tiny ivory statuette with over-sized breasts and an exaggerated vulva” as a Naughty Neanderthal’s crafting of the first piece of prehistoric pornography.
I think I’m allowed to say vulva, here. I’m not on the Michigan statehouse floor where Rep. Lisa Brown has been banned from speaking because she uttered the word vagina and offended the men who were trying to legislate hers and everyone other woman's in that state. You don’t have to stop reading. I have a tiny soapbox and I’m onto another subject—sort of.

Trust me; I’m very happy that erotic romance has become a topic of conversation because of the popularity of E. L. James’, Fifty Shades of Grey novel but the magazine's attempt to identify the tiny, ivory statuette as a naughty Neanderthal’s first attempt at prehistoric pornography had me shaking my head.

The truth is, the ivory statuette is just as likely to be representative of a respectfully worshiped symbol of a female deity. Not a pornographic representation of the female form. Someone from some long ago, Paleolithic civilization might very well have carved the statuette with as much reverence as later, male-deity worshipers carved a Christian cross.

While researching this subject, I came across a 2009 Discovery News article; written by Jennifer Viegas, that I think might have been where the Fifty Shades magazine contributors gleaned the data for their assumption. According to the article, Nicholas Conard, who reported the find and led the project where the Venus of Hohle Fels (the statuette pictured in the article, listed below) was found, remarked that nothing had changed in 40,000 years. Dr. Paul Mellars, who according to the 2009 article; was at the time a University of Cambridge archaeologist at Stony Brook University’s Turkana Basin Institute, is quoted as saying that he assumed a guy had carved it-- “...perhaps representing his girlfriend”.

It seems Dr. Mellars couldn’t help but be struck by the very sexually explicit depiction of a woman and seems to be comparing the figurine to a Paleolithic Playboy. See the entire article here: http://dsc.discovery.com/news/2009/05/13/sexy-female-artifact.html

Author, Merlin Stone, in her 1976 book When God Was A Woman, gives the people during the Paleolithic period a little more credit and proposes a different picture. Women during this period were revered as the givers of life and recognized for their fertility but they were also warriors, sages, judges, healers and anything else they wanted to be. They didn’t need to ask for permission or wait for it to be bestowed upon them. 

The text in the Fifty Shades of Grey magazine identifying the ‘Naughty Neanderthal’ carving as pornographic was probably meant to be cute but the assumptions put forth by these men in the academic world makes me wonder if their two-thousand year-old, culturally ingrained attitudes didn’t influence their judgment.

What do you think?
Paris

Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Adele Dubois Has Left The Building


I decided to pack my bags and run away from home. At least, for a little while.

As you read this, I’ve got my toes in the water and ass in the sand, as the Zac Brown Band says. I’m hanging on to the last days of summer in a death grip, until there’s no choice but to let go. The Delaware beach I love most is free of drunken college students, screaming kids, and sweating crowds after Labor Day. What could be better than taking time off to read and relax in relative solitude? The other members of my household are perfectly capable of fixing dinner and doing laundry without me.


It’s been a hardworking, tough time for me. In addition to a leadership position with my local chapter of Romance Writers of America, and a tense standoff during the Sony/Google fiasco, I have been writing novels, novellas, and short stories almost non-stop. I thought my career was about to take an important turn when I landed an agent from a big name agency, and was more than happy to pick up the pace. Unfortunately, that agent became ill soon after our contract was signed. She left the industry and rendered me orphaned.

Contract, you say? I found out quickly that contracts only serve the parties who hold the power in the relationship. Believe it.

The upshot is that I’ve been submitting to publishers on my own. Maybe I'll resume the agent search, but after getting a bad burn, I'm wary. While I wait for acceptances (as opposed to rejections!) on my submissions, I’m working on new projects. Something is bound to crack for me eventually.

I love my life, so I'm not complaining. But you know what they say about all work and no play. So…I’m enjoying a break with a little sunshine, fresh air, and tequila. I think I've earned some R & R. I’ll talk with you again soon.   Best~ Adele


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Monday, September 3, 2012

Interview of Author Sable Hunter


Today it's my pleasure to present an interview of romance author Sable Hunter.

I would like to promote Burning Love because my next book will be its sequel. It will be called Forget Me Never. It is the second book in the Cajun Spice series.
Buy Link: http://www.amazon.com/Burning-Love-Cajun-Spice-ebook/dp/B0088UXIEO/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1345426185&sr=1-1&keywords=burning+love

BIO: Sable Hunter writes erotic romance. She writes what she likes to read and enjoys putting her fantasies on paper. Her stories are emotional reads where the heroine is faced with challenges, like one of her favorite songs – she’s holding out for a hero – and boy, can she deliver a hero. Her aim is to write a story that will make you laugh, cry and sweat. If she can wring those emotions out of a reader, then she has done her job.

She grew up in south Louisiana along the mysterious bayous where the Spanish moss hangs thickly over the dark waters.  The culture of Louisiana has shaped her outlook on life and made its way into her novels where the supernatural is entirely normal.   Presently, Sable lives in Texas and spends most of her time in wild and wonderful Austin.    

She is passionate about animals and has been known to charm creatures from a one ton bull to a family of raccoons.  For fun, Sable has been known to haunt cemeteries and battlefields armed with night-vision cameras and digital recorders hunting proof that love survives beyond the grave.She writes for Secret Cravings Publishing as well as publishes much of her own work.

Join her in her world of magic, alpha heroes, sexy cowboys and hot, steamy, to-die-for sex. Step into the shoes of her heroines and escape to places where dreams can come true and orgasms only come in multiples.

Q. What part of the book is easiest for you to write?
A. The easiest part of each book to write is the love. I mean everything about the love, the sex, the falling, the hardship, the resolution, the butterfly-filled hopefulness that makes you plan forever and pick out china patterns. I LOVE writing that because that is how I like to feel. I like to grab on to those dreams of mine, my essence, my fantasies and watch them come to life in front of me. I think that is the part my readers enjoy the most as well; they can tell my passion and soul gets poured into those pieces and they feel it, too. I have readers tell me they felt like they were in the room with my characters. That is unreal! I love it so much.

Q. Who is your favorite character in your book and why?
A. That is so hard. I think it is Aron McCoy. The hero from the first book in the Hell Yeah! Series, Cowboy Heat. He is the eldest brother of the renowned Texas McCoys and has begun to be recognized by everyone in my little universe as the quintessential alpha male. He is the guy everyone runs to for help. He is the protector, the provider. He is, under the stone exterior, sweet as a kitten. There is a passage in CH where Aron says one word in front of his family and everybody (all those massive, stunningly-beautiful cowboys) know instantly that this woman belongs to Aron.
On top of that, I can’t seem to let him go! He has made an appearance in almost every book I wrote and will definitely be a huge part of the future of the Tebow Ranch. In fact, (I don’t want to give too much away) there is a HUGE event coming up that will cross my books over and Aron will play a central role in it. Look out for it. . .

Q.  If one of your books became a movie, which celebrity would you like to star as one of your heroes?
A. That’s a toughie, also. I pick Joe Manganiello. For those of you not in the know, Joe is a star in HBO’s TrueBlood. Wow, his body is just perfect. He is 6’5” and weighs like 235 lbs. He is drool-worthy. His muscles would intimidate warriors. His brooding eyes penetrate my soul and then loiter around for a few hours after. His scruff makes the whole look raw and natural and primal. It makes me come alive. The best part about Joe is, if you pay attention, you can almost see how tender-hearted he is coming through in his mannerisms. I bet he loves his momma and knows how to treat a woman right. I feel like Campbell’s Soup, Mmm, mmm, good. . .

Q. What hobby do you enjoy when not writing?
A. This is a secret, so please don’t tell anyone. I really enjoy ghost-hunting. I like to get a digital camcorder, or an audio recorder, maybe some night-vision goggles and stalk around cemeteries or old abandoned homes in the middle of the night, hoping I stumble across something spectral. The supernatural has been in my family for a dozen generations and it has not died out with me. Something about it, the magic, unknown, eternity, danger, I’m not sure exactly what, just draws me in at a level that I can’t fully comprehend and certainly can’t control. As much as I try, I can’t keep the supernatural out of my books. My next one, “Forget Me Never,” the second book in my “Cajun Spice” series, will have a particularly large helping of the paranormal in it. I think that it is part of me, part of the culture that I am trying to create, and part of the characters that inhabit my world.

Q. What is your strongest point as a writer?
A. That one is easy. The only reason I am a writer and enjoy it so much, is the same thing that gives me what strengths and accolades I have. I put myself in the stories. Every heroine is me. Each tidbit of detail I have seen. Each event is a fantasy of mine. Each barrier is a fear. Even the heroes are the men in my life; Jess is a big part of it, my Uncle, my Father, are all in the books. Each emotion is huge in my stories and that is because I really felt it. Each heartbreak is horrid, because it actually made me weep. The characters are relatable because they are real. The dreams are so fantastical because they actually are my fantasies, however unrealistic or silly they seem to anybody else. They really captured at least one person, me. That investment, the love I have for my creation, that is my strongest point.

Q. What genre would you like to try writing in but haven’t done so? Why?
A. I am very interested in writing historical romance. I love history. I love the culture of where I am from. The stories of the beginning of Texas and Louisiana captivate me. The time seems so romantic. I can imagine the forbidden love stories hidden in the gardens of a plantation, or on the trails of a cattle-drive. I like the idea of cultures mixing, the French, Spanish, English, and Native peoples warring and loving and making a place and a name for themselves. One of the biggest things that interest me, (and one you may have noticed) is the dynamic between men and women that differed. My heroes are big, powerful dominant men, that find the love of a woman that brings them to their knees and discover sweetness, gentleness and kindness they never knew before. My women are strong, yet appreciate a dominant man that takes charge and protects her. My women are real women and want a man that is a real man. There are animals in my characters. I would like to write about a time when men and women were animals. That excites me. I have not done so yet, because I am in the middle of this story. I have fallen in love with my characters, and many of my readers have as well. I don’t think we are done with them or their stories yet. When everyone’s ending is happy, we can start telling a new story.

Website: sablehunter.com
Twitter: @huntersable

BLURB:
Beau's passion burns hot for Harley Montoya. When he discovers that the woman who has inflamed his libido is the girl he fell in love with so long ago in a runaway shelter, he is overcome with joy. But Harley - or Nada as he knew her - has been burned by tragedy. They both live lives full of adventure. He builds custom weaponry and owns a reptile preserve, and she is an EOD expert - Harley defuses bombs for a living. But nothing is more explosive than the love they share.

Beau is determined to show Harley that he is worthy of her trust and that he is willing to protect her from anything that would cause her harm. But Harley has a mad-man on her trail and she can't walk away from her responsibilities. Bombs, alligators, haunted plantations and Louisiana lore spice up their life, and danger and ghosts from their past threatens to tear them apart - but nothing can put out the white-hot flames of their Burning Love.

EXCERPT: Language Warning
“Beau, did you know there is an alligator walking up the gangplank?” Harley couldn’t help herself; she backed up against the wall as the huge reptile lumbered onto the boat. She wasn’t armed and didn’t know if she could shoot the monster if she had the opportunity. He didn’t look hungry, he looked - sort of happy. Still, she wasn’t going to stand still and get eaten. “Beau!” she called. “Please come get me!”

“Awwww, come here, baby.” A door she hadn’t noticed opened up behind her and a strong arm pulled her close to the safest place she had ever known. Harley turned in his arms and nestled close, finding his closeness much more preferable than facing the alligator.

“That’s my gator, Harley. His name is Amos Moses and he doesn’t have a tooth in his head.” Beau planted kisses all over the top of her hair. “I didn’t mean for him to scare you. He doesn’t usually come aboard this time of day.”

Harley turned her head slightly, peeking around. “He doesn’t have any teeth. Why?”

“I’m not real sure, I found him half-starved when he was about three foot long. Somebody had pulled all of his teeth, probably thought they would keep him as a pet. He would have died, if I hadn’t taken him in. He’s lived on ground meat for almost ten years.”

Harley turned in his arms and smiled as the big gator ambled to the back of the boat to a place where he could bask in the sun. “So, he comes and goes as he pleases?” Gradually her heartbeat returned to normal. She became aware that he still held her tight, and she was holding on to his arm like it was her soul’s anchor.

“Yea, he keeps the burglars scared off.” Beau closed his eyes and celebrated the miracle of having Nada, Harley, in his life again. “Come on in, I want to talk. I need to know everything you’ve been doing since I lost you.”

Harley let him draw her into the cabin. “This is beautiful. I’ve never been on a houseboat before.” She was amazed at how nice it was. There was a large leather sectional sofa, a wood-burning fireplace and a fully equipped kitchen.

“I’ll show you the rest of the place in a bit,” yea, he hoped to show her his stateroom up close and personal. “Here, love; I fixed you some hot chocolate. I remember how you loved hot chocolate.” Beau picked up a cup from the bar and handed it to her and as their fingers touched, the memories flashed between them – a chilly day in the French Quarter of New Orleans when Beau bought Nada a cup of warm cocoa to stave off the winter chill.

“Thank you, I can’t believe you remembered.” They sank into the welcoming cushions of the couch and sat close, facing one another – Harley sat with one leg tucked underneath her. Her body was tingling, literally tingling. She tried to attribute it to nerves – but she knew that wasn’t it. Harley was sexually excited. Being this close to Beau and seeing the hunger in his eyes was turning her on. And God, he was aroused. She tried not to look at the bulge in his jeans, but it was really too big to miss.

“It’s all right, baby.” Beau saw where she was looking and he saw her hand tremble. “I can’t help how you make me feel, and I can’t hide it either. You know that old saying – it’s a plain as the nose on your face – well, I have a big nose – and big other parts, too.” He laughed as she ducked her head. God, was she as innocent as she appeared? The thought that she might be untouched excited him no end.

“Sorry, I shouldn’t have stared.”

“Look all you want, treasure. It already belongs to you.” He took a sip of the fragrant chocolate. “Drink your cocoa, doll. We’ve got a lot of catching up to do.” He debated how to start the conversation. Perhaps it was better to start with a safer topic. “Do you need a right or left hand stock?”

She looked relieved, “Right hand and a cheek piece, if you don’t mind. And I would love for you to put some nightforce optics on it.”

“You’re turning me on, you do realize that don’t you?” Beau laughed. “How do you know about nightforce optics?”

“I told you I could shoot.”

When she smiled, his heart skipped a beat. “Can I hold you?”

The question was so unexpected and he spoke so softly and evenly that she thought at first she had misheard him. But when he held out his arms, she realized that he wanted her to sit in his lap. The very thought made her head spin. “You want me . . . . .”

“Damn right, I want you. Come here. I want to be as close to you as possible.”

If it had been anyone but Beau, she wouldn’t have considered it in a million years – but – she did consider it. She even made a move, until something deep inside of her put the brakes on it. Nothing in her body would cooperate. “I can’t, I’m sorry.”

He took the cocoa from her unsteady hand and placed both cups on the side table. “No problem, cher. Is it me, do I make you nervous? That scares the shit out of me, you know.”

“It’s not you. I know you. Don’t think that.”

“You have no reason to be apprehensive, I would never hurt you. You know that, don’t you?” Beau searched her face, but he could read nothing in it. It was very carefully blank. What in the world could be wrong?

“I know that. It’s just too soon. Okay?”

All right, he’d abide by her wishes - mostly. “Can I touch your face? Would that be okay?”

“Oh, my goodness,” she whispered, not sure of what was happening. He waited until she gave her permission. “Sure, I don’t mind.” It was hard to be still. She didn’t know whether to jump in his arms or flee.

Slowly he raised one big hand and with the most gentle of touches ran his thumb over her cheek, then cupped one side of her face. “Now, let me look at you. Yea, there they are - amber eyes. That same sweet little mouth I kissed so long ago. Well, of course, you’re my Nada. Why didn’t I see it before?”

Beau’s voice was so tender, Harley almost cried. “It’s not so bad when you say it.”

“When I say what?” Kiss. He wanted to kiss her so bad. It was hard to think when she was so close.

“Nada.”

“Why would that be bad? Isn’t that your name?” Something was bothering her, so he stoked the fire in his blood and gave her his complete attention. “What do you mean?”

“Don’t you know? It means I’m nothing.”

“Nothing?” What did she mean? He was missing something.

“When I was born, I had a caul over my face. Do you know what that is?”

Why did she look ashamed? “Sure, that’s when the baby has a bit of membrane over its face, and people used to believe that child was born with second sight.” Beau watched her press her eyes together and bite her lip. “I don’t understand – that’s a good thing. Old timers around here would say you were blessed.” 
He played with the loose material, smoothing the front of her shirt, just anxious to touch her anywhere he could. She covered his hands with her own, stilling the movement of his fingers.

“Hardly. My father thought the veil over my face meant that I was spiritually cursed, that’s why he named me ‘nothing’.”

Damn! “Nothing? That’s what the word nada means? And it wasn’t an accident, he told you that?” Beau wanted to hit something.

“Over and over again – everyday he told me how worthless I was. That’s why I ran away from home when I was thirteen.” That was how she ended up in Brownwood.

“Oh, sweetheart,” he leaned over and kissed her forehead before she could stop him. She didn’t move away, thank God. “I am so sorry. His loss is my gain. Now that I’ve found you again, I’m never letting you go. I’ll admit it – before, I was entranced with you.” His voice was husky and he ran a hand up and down her arm, as if he were trying to soothe away every cruel word that had been said to her. “I fell fuckin’ head over heels for you when I only knew you as sexy Harley. And now I find out that you are the one precious thing in my life I thought I had lost. Do you understand what this means to me? Baby, 
I’m holding on to you with both hands. I may never let you out of my sight again.”

His words were like another language, one so foreign that she only recognized a few phrases. But the gentle look in his eyes made her feel safe. Every taunt her father had thrown at her was being made powerless. And before she could protest, he leaned in and captured her lips for a quick kiss and the world stopped turning on its axis. Heat. Peace. Hunger. Emotions that Harley thought she had no claim to, burst forth into her heart. His lips were coaxing and warm and she had to grab the material of his shirt to keep from clinging to his broad, broad shoulders.

“Mmmmmm,” he groaned into her mouth. He couldn’t help it; his hands wouldn’t stay where he put them to save his life. They found their way to her back, coaxing her up against him so there was no doubt in her mind that he was fully engaged – mind as well as body. “Cher, cher – my God, you are like the sweetest honey. I could get so addicted to you.” He had to have more. Hungrily, his lips slid down her neck, nuzzling her throat, scraping his teeth on her skin and sucking enough to leave a tiny mark. He couldn’t remember ever being so instantly voracious for a woman.

With a little whimper of surprise and surrender, Harley tentatively brought her arms around his neck. It was like coming home.

Hallelujah! Beau hugged her. “That’s my girl.” She was gorgeous – she was sexy as hell, a mixture of softness and strength that literally made him ache with longing. “You’re far from nothing. You are a treasure, a precious jewel. You are my all in all.” All the time he was talking, he was rubbing his lips and nose on the side of her face – inhaling her scent – marking her as sure as one the ghost cats of the swamp marked its territory. Black panthers were real. Even though their existence was denied by the authorities, Beau had seen them with his own eyes. When they wanted to claim something as their own, they rubbed their scent on it by passing their mouth across the object – leaving a brand of possession – the same way he was marking Harley.

Her body hungered while her mind whirled at the myriad of wondrous things she was feeling. So this was what she had been missing - this amazing need to belong to someone. But. . . but. . what if? God, what if she couldn’t? What if he couldn’t? She put her hands up between them – pushing back – making a space between them. “Stop, Beau.”

“Too fast?” She nodded her head, slightly. “I understand, baby. We’re not strangers – but, it has been years.” He had no intention of rushing her. She was just too precious.

“There’s so much you don’t know,” she whispered.

“You can tell me anything,” he nudged her face with his, his lips grazing her skin.

“I want to. Beau. . . . .” She was just about to - Lord, she didn’t know what she was about to say – when her beeper sounded and made her bounce in his embrace like a Mexican jumping bean. Immediately his arms tightened around her.

“I gotcha’ precious,” he kissed her neck. “Whoever is calling you, tell them you are otherwise occupied – with me.”

Harley looked down – Shit! “As much as I would like to stay – I have to take care of this – duty calls.” 
Casting aside her doubts, she laid her head on his shoulder and hugged him tight. “This has been wonderful. I can’t tell you what it means to find you again. Thank you, for everything.”

She started to get up, but he stopped her. “Hey, wait a minute. Are you sure you have to go?” He wasn’t ready for their evening to be over – not by a long shot. Would he ever tire of looking at her face? High cheekbones, a sweetly curved jaw, and a pair of lips capable of transporting him to paradise – each feature was pleasing to the eye, but combined - they were lethal to his self-control. “Do you have any idea how beautiful you are?”

“I’m not,” she protested, even as she placed her hands on his biceps – half-heartedly keeping him at a distance. “Thank you for saying so, though. I wish I didn’t have to go. It’s my job – there’s an emergency.”

He let her get up, reluctantly. “Okay, I’ll take you home.”

“Thank you, I appreciate it.” As she gathered her things, her mind was already racing ahead wondering where she would have to go and what she would have to face. “I’m sorry to rush off like this.”

“It’s okay, Honey.” She seemed worried. And that worried him. “Do you want to talk about it?”

They hurried down the gangplank and onto the dock. Harley was aware of her surroundings – the cypress knees, the Spanish moss – it was all so beautiful and she wished she could stay and not face whatever new horror some maniac had devised to blow people up. “It’s a long story and I will tell you about it, I promise.” He opened the door for her and hurried around, realizing she was anxious.

She was texting on her phone when he got behind the wheel, so he started up and gunned it – not wanting to disturb her focus. When she finished, he pressed again. “When will you be back?” Damn, he felt possessive – “I told you I didn’t want to let you out of my sight.”

A thrill shot through Harley. No one had ever worried about her before, and he had no idea where she was going or what her job entailed. “I’m never gone long. I’ll be back tomorrow; it will all be over by then.”

“Tomorrow – what time?” Beau got amused at himself.

“Just stop by the Hummer, I keep a change of clothes in there and I need to get on the road.” As he pulled next to her vehicle, she gave him one last long look before she got out. “I can’t say for sure what time I’ll be back, but I will call you.” Reaching for the door handle, she was brought up short by a strong, but gentle hand around her neck.

“Promise?” He held her gaze for a long, intense moment.

“I promise.” Without asking permission, he leaned over and kissed her once more – a chaste kiss full of longing.

"Give me your phone." She handed it over and he put his number in, and gave it back. "I'll be waiting." With that, she got out, leaving him sitting there, watching her go. Harley knew everything had changed, because this time when she left - part of her heart stayed behind.

Sunday, September 2, 2012

Volunteering to Judge a Contest




This is a last minute post today. Sort of. I had another I originally would share but I just finished reviewing the last of five story entries for a contest. Whew! Never done that before and I decided to scrap the first post and talk about my experience.Don’t know if anyone here today reading this has ever judged—anything—let me see a show of hands. Don’t be shy, c’mon, raise them high. 

Well, let me tell you, there is a lot of responsibility, even if you do it anonymously. I was in their position once. New, and not sure if I'd make one sale or honestly, if someone liked my writing style and stories. I guess there will always be someone who doesn't, but if I'm being judged that can be nerve-wracking so I took on this task keeping that in mind even if the person wouldn't know I graded their "babies". You want to be fair, but if it isn't perfect, don't you have to judge it as such? Critical, but nice about it. I'm of the belief that you can't learn from your mistakes if no one tells you. I'd want someone to tell me and actually every time I get my first line edits back, I always cringe and wonder--Ohmigod how many plot mistakes did I make? Did I have my hero and heroine moving body parts defying the laws of physics. Or, how many typos did I miss? Since my first book, I've learned so, so much and took all the criticisms from reviewers, editors and readers a true learning experience. I approached the judging in the same fashion when I decided to accept the judging.

Keeping all the above in mind, when I was asked if I was interested, I enthusiastically jumped on the idea. I like to read and don’t always have the opportunity because I’m usually up to my eyeballs working on my own stories and promoting. I figured this would be a great opportunity to read new things, which by the way I did, and give me a break away from my own works. I write mainly, no really almost exclusively, paranormal and none of the five were so I was ecstatic. I dove head first into reading them and overall, I’m glad I did. Yes, it took time because each entry was over 200 pages and the last one just shy of 300 pages. I don’t know these authors, whether they are currently published, aspiring, or what, but I tackled each one with a respectful eye. Takes courage to put our “babies” out there for others to read and possibly pick apart, so I wanted to do this right and not be biased because I didn’t like the subject matter.

I didn’t Google the writers/authors to see if they were published and looked at each entry with a critical eye. I have to admit, the hardest part involved cutting my internal editor off. Yes, I made mental notes if the typos, misspelled words, persistent head-hopping, and weird sentences. I made note on those items on the grading at the end. The storyline was what I was interested in the most and I must say two out of the three were winners in my opinion, one of which was just a bit better. Two others were okay and with some tweaking/polishing had potential and the last one was just really not good even with fixing the multitude of problems.

For my first time judging, I found the experience a very good one. My comments and scoring on all were fair, I think. But, as I’m familiar with the reviews I’ve received on my books, some like, some don’t and I guess the same happens when judging. Certainly gives a different perspective when writing my own pieces now. Kind of gives you thought. It’s not easy to read something and grade it. If I had to read these entries to give a review, the one I didn’t like I probably would have politely declined to rate. Unfortunately, not all reviewers (not the drive-by reader types on the top retailers or social networks, and you guys know what I’m talking about) take that approach.
Would I do it again? Yes, if asked. I took the task on as a learning experience, plus reading different genres was fun. Don’t think I’d write in them because I like my vampires, but they were an adventure worth exploring.

Now, with this break over, I’m ready to get back to writing my next dark vampire story and do some more promo for my new release. Look for it coming soon to your nearest etailer. And if you read it, be honest I can take the criticism because I want to learn to be better.

Signing off for another month,
 Cynthia Arsuaga
Erotic Romance Author
http://romanticwordsbycynthia.blogspot.com

P.S. Everyone in the States, have a nice Labor Day!!!

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Saturday, September 1, 2012

What Makes a "Good Read"?

I sat and considered different topics for my blog today, and kept coming back to this:

What makes a romance book a "good read"?

So much has changed in our industry as to HOW you can receive a romance story. Print (both normal and large size)? Digital? Audio?

I'm at the point where I don't buy print books unless it's REALLY something special. I have an ereader. That's all I need. I could listen to audio books, but I'm more of a visual learner than audio learner.

How I receive a story isn't really important; it's the quality of the writing that counts. And, I've read some awful big NY published books (actually didn't finish the ones I considered terrible) as well as newly, first-time published author books (from epubs/small publishers/self-pubbed).

Here's what I need to be truly enticed and immersed in a romance book:


1. Have a great opening hook.
Please...spare me the flowery, overdone setting with descriptions of every bush, tree, river, piece of furniture in a room, etc. My eyes glaze over at too much setting description. I don't need nor want a lot of it...I can create a room/scenery from small tidbits an author gives.

I WANT to be suddenly involved in a story. Having dialogue first always intrigues me. It's like sneaking up behind the people talking and eavesdropping on their conversation. And, so much about the characters/scene can be deduced from listening to the characters' words.

Get me involved. Put me right into the action. But, don't have SO much going on that I can't figure out who is talking or what names/places they're talking about. I once read a book for an RWA contest, and was completely turned off after the first two pages. I had no idea who the people were, what places they were talking about, etc. Perhaps it was because it was a series book and I hadn't read the first two books. Character names and names of places were tossed out to the reader so quickly that I felt I needed to make lists of names in order to proceed if I wanted to continue with the book. 

2. Give me names I can pronounce/read/relate to. Okay. I know paranormal books don't always give this option, but IF the book is intriguing, I can overlook some weird names/spellings. But if you have names that start to irritate me because I can't read them....or they're 4 words long...you'll lose me.

3. Have a great plot. It can be simple. There's nothing wrong with boy meets girl, boy and girl are attracted to each other but have a conflict, boy and girl overcome conflict. It can be complicated but not TOO complicated. Too many subplots/tangents to a story can be frustrating and I'll lose interest.

4. Don't have Spelling/grammar/editing mistakes. They immediately take me away from the story. Books need to be carefully edited with lots of "eyes" checking every page.

5. Have dialogue that sounds "real" otherwise I can't stay focused. It doesn't matter what genre I'm reading, the dialogue needs to make me feel like I'm standing right there, in the action/heat of the moment, hearing" flowing conversation that makes sense.

6. Create likable characters. The hero needs to be sensitive/guy next door/helpful...strong but somehow vulnerable. The heroine needs to be sensitive/girl next door/helpful...strong but not overly aggressive. Some romances take the "strong" woman approach too far and heroines can actually become annoying. I don't want heroines to lose their feminine side...nor do I want heroes to become wimpy crying, and submissive.

7. Use your voice; don't try to copy another author's voice. Tell the story YOUR way. Trying to become like someone else and copy their voice/style can be distracting. And, you may switch back and forth while writing since your "inner voice" will attempt to tell your story.

8. Have a great cover and title. Covers can be a turn-off. I've seen some strange/awkward ones that left me wondering what the artist/author really wanted displayed. And titles? Please. Make them simple but not weird. I know and admire author Carla Cassidy and her writing...however, her book titled "Pregnesia" is one of the worst titles I've seen.

These are my suggestions. These are what will keep me reading a book I'd consider a "good read".

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