Our August
theme is Dear Diary – and when I was younger, I tried several times to keep a
diary. I discovered rather quickly that I had a terribly boring life, and not
much worth recording for future perusal. So, my diary quickly became something
else entirely, which perhaps should have given me a clue about things to come.
I started writing down my dreams when I remembered them, because some of them
were pretty cool. In the end, this grew into detailed notes for stories that I didn’t
realize were stories I would one day write into books.
Recently, I
found several old-fashioned diaries I’d forgotten about. The ones young girls
seem to all have been given as a gift at one time or another, the one with the
cute picture and the little lock to keep all those secrets we think are so
scared they need to be protected. When I started reading some of the things I’d
recorded, I began to remember the many intriguing dreams and ideas that shaped
so many of the entries. Things from the television shows I used to love
watching that evolved and expanded the scripts I’d been seeing come to life.
Movies that I continued to write after the end credits rolled… it’s no real
wonder I started writing those stories and became involved in fan fiction for
many years, it was so much fun to write these things!
Amid all
the schoolgirl tales there were also original worlds I’d imagined and detailed,
some of which have been used in my publishing books over the past ten years.
So, long before there was a conscious decision to write books professionally,
the groundwork was being done. Who knew? Not me for sure!
I’ve always
loved the idea of diaries and journals, and on more than one occasion they have
played key plot roles in several stories I’ve had published. No doubt they will
come into the plot again at some time, especially in the historical works where
this type of journal truly is a glimpse of the past, or the insight into a
heart and soul. And, while I don’t keep my journals locked, or call them
diaries now, believe me, there are still plenty of records and notes,
handwritten and carefully organized. Books in the making, maybe…
The
storyteller who narrates my newest release might have a journal, too – it would
certainly be interesting to consider. If you like fairytales, feel free to
check out Favola, which is Italian for fairytale, by the way.
In the town of Favola, a prince and a
lovely girl imprisoned by her mother's jealousy find passion and love... but
will it be enough to outsmart the machinations and fury that their devotion
inspires in the beautiful Bella Venezia? An Italian fairytale is re-told for an
adult audience....
Short Excerpt:
“Her name is Capricia,” someone informed him, and
he turned to see an old man working next to him, arranging steaming pies and
fresh fruit into appealing displays. He was smiling with affection and appreciation.
Francesco turned away just in time to see the girl vanish into the throng of
people.
“Where can I find her?” He was craning his neck,
trying to catch sight of her again. Francesco grabbed the man’s arm and shook
him. “Where?”
The old man laughed. “La Locanda di Pericoli Nascosti,” he replied with a knowing wink at
the baker, who was watching the exchange. “She is the daughter of the woman who
owns the place.”
“And where might I find this Inn of Hidden Dangers, old one?” Francesco’s question was curt, he
was eager now to seek out the girl and see if she could be charmed into being
his companion for the night. The old man’s gaze was shrewd, the heat of
embarrassment warmed Francesco’s face, the other man had all but read his
intentions.
“Be careful of her mother, boy,” was all the old
man said. “End of the road there,” he added, crooked finger aimed in the
general direction where the girl had disappeared. “It’s easily found.”
Puzzling over the old man’s vague warning,
Francesco turned in the direction he’d been shown and continued. It took only
minutes to discover the busy inn. He tied his horse to a rail, and went inside.
The common room was filled with travelers and local
people. As he approached the counter, he saw the lovely woman who ran the place
and stopped to listen as she spoke with a newly arrived patron.
“Tell me, signore,”
she all but purred, leaning forward so the stranger could see the lush swells
of her breasts, “have you seen a more beautiful woman than me?”
The man shook his head and swore he had never set
eyes on anyone more beautiful than her, Bella Venezia. Satisfied, she told him
he could have his room that night for half the usual price.
Francesco stepped forward, and once again she
turned on her charm.
“Are you here for a room, signore, or merely to enjoy my company?”
Francesco smiled. She was a fine-looking woman, and
it would have been very easy to be swept away by her ample charms, but another
face haunted his heart now, and stirred his desires as no other woman had.
Francesco had escaped his family for a time, tired of the endless parade of
potential brides being brought before him. None had appealed to him, yet this
stranger had captured his heart, and his imagination. He’d return home with the
bride of his choosing, once he found her again.
“Your charm and beauty is undeniable, signora,” he replied smoothly. “But my
heart has been stolen by one so fair I cannot live without her. Your own
daughter, Capricia.”
When Bella’s eyes narrowed and she glared at him,
Francesco knew he had made a grave error in allowing his heart to speak before
he could think. He had been foolish enough to believe a mother would be pleased
to have her daughter admired.
“Then you may pay twice the price for the privilege
of admiring her, signore,” she
informed him.
“Then I have still been granted a bargain, signora,” he assured her, resisting
laughter at the anger seething in the woman’s eyes. Her striking face set into
hard lines of resentment, and her eyes were glacial. He paid her and she told
him what room was his for the night.
Francesco went to settle in and wait for nightfall.
He did not plan on spending his time alone, not when the girl of his heart’s
dreams was only a short distance away.
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I love the retelling of fairy tales and this looks like a good one.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great excerpt, Denyse. Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteHow cool you have your old journals. Your Italian fairy tale sounds like a great read.
ReplyDeleteThank you, ladies!! I had fun with this one, I admit. You can be a little more flowery with the style if you're doing a fairytale kind of tone, and adding my own twists to a story that is already well established was interesting, too, because I didn't want to stray too far from the original story. The publisher now wants a sequel to tell the other prince's story, so who knows? Might have to revisit Favola down the road. Hugs, D
ReplyDeleteBeautiful cover! I love that you still have your journals! Priceless!!
ReplyDeleteEnticing excerpt....Love fairy tales of all kinds...
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