I'm delighted one of the choices for a my blog this month included the ocean. Here's a long excerpt from Victoria's Visions, a book about to re-issued soon by MuseItUp. I think Amazon still had the current version. Vicky is a mage, and has power over water that Cabot has difficulty accepting, until the action in this scene convinces even him.
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She led
the way down a narrow, winding path. Some scrub trees grew against the side of
the cliff, but mostly they passed only jutting rocks. When the path widened out
onto the beach, Cabot saw Victoria hadn’t misled him, as a beckoning stretch of
smooth sand opened before them.
With a
kick of her boots, Victoria headed down the beach as fast as she could urge
Lally to go.
With a
yell of “No fair,” Cabot spurred after her. Grinning even as he raced along,
determined to catch her and pass. The damp sand made the going slow, but after
a few minutes Victoria hauled up. He pulled up rein too, wondering why she’d
stopped so suddenly and surprised at the anger blazing on her shocked face.
“Look,
Cabot. We’ve got to stop those wicked men. Just look what they’re doing.”
She
jumped off Lally and headed toward three young men. Two of them stood on the
shore cheering their companion, a large lout carrying a burlap sack. The sides
of the sack bulged in and out, and the frightened meows coming from it told
Cabot several kittens were in the bag. About to be drowned by the biggest
ruffian.
Victoria
waded straight into the water, heading toward the one with the sack while the
two companions jeered and clapped nearer the shore.
“Go right
ahead, missy. What do you think you’re gonna do? Think you can stop three of us
from our fun? We’re bigger than you, ya know.”
He threw
back his shaggy head and laughed. A cruel laugh that told Vicky all she needed
to know. This was no mercy killing. He was enjoying it.
She
didn’t answer, just kept striding through the calm water. Cabot immediately
dismounted and headed toward them, catching one of the two nearest thugs by the
arm and wheeling him around directly into a deadly punch to his jaw. His
companion roared and rushed at Cabot, who took a second to ascertain the one
he’d downed would stay down before turning to the other brute. Even as they
were trading blows, they heard the thug in the ocean shout as Victoria caught
up to him and grabbed his coat. Cabot didn’t look up again; he knew Victoria
would soon need him, and he wanted to get this one out of the way and go to
her.
”Street fighters usually can’t beat trained
boxers.” Something he’d heard his father say over and over as he insisted
both his sons have boxing lessons. Cabot disposed of the second bully and then
waded into the ocean toward Victoria. She and the thug stood in about two feet
of water. He held the sack just out of her reach, laughing at her.
“Jes’
like a female,” he jeered. “Caring if a few more kittens get killed. I’d drown
everyone born iff’n I could.”
Cabot
stood close behind her when she stopped and stood still for a few seconds. She
glanced to see he was there, took his hand tightly, and closed her eyes. Her
lips moved in silence while the bully chuckled and sneered.
They all
heard a roar as a huge wave about three feet wide headed directly toward them.
It seethed and growled with a life of its own and concentrated its aim and its force
on the taunting thug. He heard its monstrous coming and turned in horror to run,
dropping the sack in his fright. Vicky and Cabot stood not far away in calm
waters, as the water zeroed on the ruffian. Vicky stood silently, her lips
moving as she kept her eyes down, and she now somehow held the bag of kittens.
Cabot watched in stunned and silent disbelief.
The rogue
wave grabbed the bully, and he disappeared into the massive crest of foam.
There’d been no chance of escape. The wave lifted him off his feet and, while
his thrashing body reappeared from second to second, he would soon vanish again
in the water. Cabot almost automatically took the sack from Victoria. From the
pitiful meows the kittens were drenched, but safe. He and Victorian watched as
the man struggling in the water appeared powerless to save himself from the
massive waves buffeting him. Rolling him over and under the water, again and
again.
It seemed
like a long time to Cabot before the rogue wave flung the bully onto the shore
and then retreated, leaving its victim limp and unconscious. The spectacular crest
of water vanished, and the ocean at once resumed its orderly, almost silent
pattern. Cabot stared. His mind a thoughtless jumble, he stood without words.
Victoria took
his hand, and she and Cabot were almost to shore before he stopped her and
turned her to him.
“What
happened just now? I saw it, but what happened? The water was calm where we
were standing. What happened, Vicky?”
“Exactly
what you saw, Cabot. I know you aren’t able to accept it yet. I have certain
mage powers over water. I asked the waves to teach the brute what it feels like
to be drowned. He’s not drowned, but he felt desperate for quite a while. Now
I’ve frozen him like I did the skunk. This gives us time to get away with the
kittens. Let’s go back to shore. He won’t bother us. He’s not going to feel too
rambunctious for a while after he wakes up.”
His
bewilderment must have been plain, as she sighed.
“I’m a
descendant of the Lady of the Lake, as well as Merlin. I have certain abilities
with water, just like my sister Jennivere. Water power seems to go particularly
to our female line. I’m sorry you saw this so soon, Cabot. I rarely need to
call on this strength, but I couldn’t let those darling kittens be drowned.”
Cabot
looked at her lovely face and found himself forced to consider again the
knowledge he’d been trying to dodge. He took a deep breath but said nothing
more. There was no denying what he’d seen. Beautiful Victoria wielded a weapon
more potent than his fists would ever be."
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Jean, as a cat lover, I especially love your excerpt. So cool you live close to the ocean. I love the ocean too. Sounds like a great story.
ReplyDeleteI loved your excerpt, so glad they saved the kittens. I wished I lived close to the ocean. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI loved the excerpt. I hope that the bad bully never thinks to harm another animal again.
ReplyDeleteCara, I get more fog than a few miles further inland, but it's worth it. Raised in Ohio, I fell I love with the ocean at first sight and still adore seeing it in all its phases. High tide is so impressive, and the surfers take such chances (or so it seems to me),
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Judy and Melissa... guess you can tell I'm a cat lover! Like dogs too, of course, but there's something about a cat purring in your ear.
ReplyDeleteI love to think of the ocean as having moods. You writers do such wonderful turns of phrases. :)
ReplyDeleteRose, it definitely does. Right now the Pacific near me is earning its name, with small waves barely lapping each other. Big storm on the way this weekend, supposedly, and that might change things.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the reissue, Jean - loved the excerpt! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tina, glad you came. That whole series was fun, fun, fun to write. The part in this book where she rescues a skunk is pretty funny, too
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