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April’s theme is daisies, diamonds, and storms.
Thought I'd stay with storms since I do write about them, even though
my home state of California is in a sever drought and we don't get enough in the way of rain.
Every drop of water is precious. Lucky for us we just had rain pass through here two days ago.
Photo by Janice Seagraves |
In my SF book Matrix Crystal Hunters I have a rain storm.
Excerpt:
“I smell rain and my wrist hurts.”
She showed him the arm that had gotten bitten by the sherakey. Her wrist was
swollen. “It’s a weather gauge now.” She pulled a flat, round package out of
her backpack. Walking around, she spent some time studying the ground.
“Now what are you looking for?”
“A smooth, level place to set my
tent up.” She showed him the pouch in her hand.
He chuckled. “That’s not a tent.”
“Yes it is. Just watch.” She took
something out of the pouch, then flung it out. From her hand, sprang a tent,
which landed perfectly set up. Taking out some spikes, she hammered them into
the ground, securing it. She tucked a few things from the bags under her arm
and went inside.
Vach saw the lantern go on and heard
her air pump humming inside the tent, as she inflated her mattress. He found
her backpack and popped his head through the entrance of the tent. “I have your
things.”
“Thanks.” She took it from him.
He looked around the inside of the
tent. It looked like the same one she’d used in the ancient building, where she
had nailed him with a frying pan. She’d taken down the tent while he had loaded
up her jeep. “There’s a lot of room in here.”
“Yes. Sometimes I keep my
instruments in here with me, so they’ll be safe.”
“There’s room in here for my bed
roll.” He pointed at a spot on the floor.
“Nope.” She shook her head. “You’re
not staying in here.”
“I’m your servant. I stay where you
stay.”
“Not this time.”
“Oh?” He raised his eyebrows.
“You’re sleeping by the fire so you
can gaze up at the night sky.” Maya grabbed something and shoved it against his
chest. “Just to show what a great mistress I am, I got you a sleeping bag.” She
turned him around and propelled him out the door.
Stumbling out, he turned to frown
back at her. “Some gratitude.”
“Gratitude for what?” She stuck her
head out of the tent flap to stare at him.
“For getting you off Brawley’s
back.” He grinned. “I could have just left you up there.”
“But you didn’t.”
“No, but I might next time.”
She arched an eyebrow. “Would you
really be that petty?”
“I might be.” He smirked, waiting
her out.
She shrugged. “Then you wouldn’t be
my servant, now, would you?”
Vach watched the zipper as it sealed
the tent closed. She got me.
He dropped the sleeping bag on his
blanket, by the fire, and went to organize the packs he’d taken off the
animals. A water drop hit him on the back of his hand. Glancing up, more drops
hit his face.
Goddess,
she has better weather sense than I do.
He moved the packs to higher ground and then covered them with a waterproof
tarp.
Shaking out his blanket, he tucked
it, together with his new sleeping bag, under his arm and hurried to the tent
as the rain began to pour down.
He unzipped the tent flap and
stepped inside.
Maya gasped. She jerked her pajama
top closed. Turning her back to him, she quickly buttoned it up. “Vach! What
are you doing in here?”
“It’s raining.” He swept a hand over
his head, getting off some of the water. “You don’t want your servant sleeping
out in the wet, do you?”
“You should have knocked first.” She
grabbed her pajama bottoms.
“On a tent?” Vach briefly managed to
get a look at her bottom, covered in the silky material of her panties, before
she to pull her PJs up.
“Well, scratch on the material, or
say knock-knock or something. Don’t just barge in on me while I’m changing
clothes.”
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Great excerpt. I love the storm picture you took.
ReplyDeleteWonderful excerpt, Janice. We had clouds and like two drops of rain in Palm Springs over the weekend. *sigh*
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt, Janice! I'd like to send you some of our rain but the farmers would protest.
ReplyDeletelol, "knock on a tent" very enjoyable, Janice. We had mega rains last night and more to come. I can't complain because of the drought.
ReplyDeleteLoved the excerpt..but is she wearing panties under her PJ's? Or did I read it wrong?
ReplyDeleteHi Cara,
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Hi Tina,
Thank you, and Oh dear. Sounds like Palm Spring needs rain too.
Hi Paris,
Thank you. We'd take any rain you want to send our way. :)
Hi Vicki,
Thank you.
Wish we'd have some more rain.
Hi Jean,
Thank you. Yes, she is wearing panties under her PJs. She wasn't completely dressed that's why she was saying he need to knock, and he was trying to get a peak at her under clothes. :)
Janice~
I enjoyed your excerpt. I too love rain, especially when it a warm summer rain.
ReplyDeleteI know we need rain, but I'm not a fan. Makes my joint ache. LOL It makes for a pretty picture though. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteKelley
What a fabulous excerpt! I love the rain, a big thunderstorm or a simple rain. All the best!
ReplyDeleteHi Judy,
ReplyDeleteThank you. That's what we got over the weekend. Warm summer(ish) rain. It cool us down just a bit.
Hi Kelley,
Thank you. My knees and hands hurt when it rains, but I do love storms.
Hi Melissa,
Thank you. I do too. :)
Janice~