Vale looked at the beautiful girl in his arms, her eyes
shining with what he hoped was the beginning of love. At least it was desire,
and pray all the elves it was enough. That she’d permit him to take her the way
he longed, with his most ardent love. For him it was a pledge and the first
step in a lifetime of devotion.
He also recognized he didn’t have much time to prepare her
before he shot his cum. He’d wanted her for far too long. Clamping down on his
desire, he turned his thoughts to pleasing her. He kissed her again, thrusting
his tongue in and out in imitation of the motion he’d soon be making with his
long, swollen cock. He fought the raging impulse to plunge into her without any
more preliminaries, and he managed to reach with one hand for her mound.
Parting the folds until he found her clit, he was delighted to find her
dripping wet. With a small prayer of thanks she was so responsive, he began to
caress that most sensitive spot. He leaned over and kissed it and she started.
He moved up to kiss her lips deeply again, throttling any protest with his
tongue in her mouth. Keeping up his finger’s rotation on her clit, he held on
fiercely to his self-control. He lasted until she gasped and bit his tongue
lightly, and then caressed the inside of his mouth in a provocative dance of
tongues that finished off his control.
Looping her legs over his shoulders, he placed his cock
against her vulva and quickly found her entrance. She was already slippery with
her own juices and he had no trouble entering. He had enough sense left be
gentle until he’d pierced her virgin’s membrane, which was thankfully thin.
Then he plunged into her, unable to slow himself as he wished. To do anything
but quickly sink himself to the hilt. He withdrew, and then plunged in again.
In a few deep strokes he brought himself to stunning orgasmic pleasure, unlike
anything he had felt before.
Leaving his cock buried in her body, he raised on his elbows
and kissed her with love, eyes filled with regret.
“I’m sorry I was in such a hurry. It was not well done of
me. I’ve wanted you for too long. I lost control just when I wanted to bring
you pleasure.”
She smiled up at him. “But you did, Vale. More than I knew
existed.”
He looked a little rueful, knowing she’d not experienced
what he wanted for her. Not at all.
“Please don’t look regretful. I’m sure we can do it again
sometime. I rather liked it, you know.”
So sorry you lost your original post, Jean, but this one was excellent.
ReplyDeleteHey, Jean, I checked out your original post it was in drafts.
ReplyDeleteSandy, I looked under scheduled, which was where I left it. I forgot they sometimes jumped to drafts all on their own. I should have checked last night. I'm in the processing of selling my house and was busy all day with lookers. I think I need a keeper.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your newest release, Jean - your story sounds wonderful. :)
ReplyDeleteBlogger sometimes boggles the mind. So sorry you lost your original post but I did enjoy your post:)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Paris and Tina. I'll resurrect the old one and publish it next month. Blogger and I don't always get along....
ReplyDeleteSorry you lost your work. :( It's happened to me and can be such a bummer. But this excerpt definitely was a great delight! Thanks for sharing it with us! :)
ReplyDeleteWow, that's a hot excerpt. You may have lost your original post, but this one was great.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Cara. Since I've switched to writing erotica I'm having fun writing it.
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