When it comes to
finishing a first draft without tinkering too much I really do start out with
the best of intentions. Then, of course, my internal editor starts in with the
but…but…if you don’t add this important bit of information, which you need to
look up right this minute, because…
I believe I’ve
written before about being distracted by the “sparkly”. Research is a sparkly
that I can’t seem to resist. Especially, when I’ve been trapped in the house by
snow and falling temperatures and need a pleasant distraction.
My current WIP
requires a basic knowledge of World War I and bootlegging. Basic, is a relative
term. The time period fascinates me and I keep justifying the time spent away
from writing because I need the information—for background. For a character the
reader will be learning about as the series progresses.
As happy as this
makes my internal editor, it ticks off my muse. She’s promised me a prize the next
time I manage to write an entire first draft without looking up any information.
I could use some new duds for the Romantic Times Convention that’s coming up in
May but I’m pretty sure I’ve already blown any chance of making her deadline by
then.
I joke about my
attention span, but being snowed in for almost two weeks is not conducive to
staying focused. The one thing I do feel that I’ve been accomplishing lately,
is finding out why this character would behave the way he does. Because
everything, from the price of bread to the length of ladies hemlines depended
on and still does depend on what’s going on in the world at the time the
character lived.
I tell myself
that, in the long run, I’m saving time. I know; I’m rationalizing—but I’m
looking for a good argument the next time my muse starts whining.
Do you write
your first draft without stopping or is your internal editor a buttinsky? Humor
me. It will go a long way in alleviating my cabin fever and my curious nature.
Until next
month,
Happy Reading
(and/or Writing)!
Paris Brandon
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11 comments:
Great post, Paris.
I used to get so deep into research I read reams of it for my novels. I then felt I had to impart all that fascinating knowledge to readers. However, when I re-read the first draft I was bored spitless. That's when I took all that stuff out and limited my research to what was absolutely essential and understandable.
I'm currently reading a novel by a well-known author who loves to put all that stuff into the plot. Damn, in almost every sentence there are words I've never heard of, stuff I really don't care about. I find myself skipping to get to the good parts - you know, the people - how they feel, the danger they're in emotionally and physically. That's all I care about.
This was a great post. I have been sharing the Midwest's snow everywhere kind of days for awhile now too.
I love that you get caught up in researching and think bootlegging and WWI must be some great reading.
I try to only do a little research to begin or I find parts of my books sound more like manuals than entertainment.
Being a retired teacher, the habit of trying to make every moment a teaching one is something I find hard to get away from in general and especially now that I am writing YA.
I have faith that you will find control of your researched facts in edits. Just remember that with all of this additional researched information in your arsenal, you will be even more prepared to be a fantastic Jeopardy contestant!
Thanks, Tina!
I do have to resist putting all that lovely information that I find so fascinating into the draft, lol! But then again, maybe that's where it all belongs so that I know what to weed out:)
You are so right, I read to become caught up in the world the characters inhabit, if an author can do that, I'm there!
Thanks, Goldie!
Yes, WWI and bootlegging have always held a particular lure--but I think it has mostly to do with how people managed to get through the trials of the time.
LOL! I never thought about Jeopardy but you might have a point:)
Paris, your new WIP sounds fascinating.
I love collecting research and I have to practice self-restraint. This is my formula:
For every gallon of research collected add only a Tablespoon to the WIP. : )
You know me - a total research slut. LOL. I can empathize with getting lost in research because it's fun and it distracts you from the job at hand. But...my turn with the CP whip...GET WRITING! NOW! Grin.
Francesca
Good post. I research the period I'm writing about like made before I start a book. Get the feel of the period and then use very few of the actual facts. But it's sure tempting to pack more in.
Kat,
Thanks! I may tape your formula to my monitor, lol:)
Francesca,
lol! I really am going to send you something to read, soon:)
Thanks, Jean. I know what you mean. It's so tempting. Restraint is my new watchword:)
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