tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post5993863279434644227..comments2024-03-24T13:49:53.099-04:00Comments on Romance Books '4' Us: Scenic ViewUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-32684520411219659542012-01-20T14:18:32.532-05:002012-01-20T14:18:32.532-05:00Nice excerpt. A scene doesn't need a lot of de...Nice excerpt. A scene doesn't need a lot of detail so you can "see it" and what you had was just right.Janice Seagraveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02576031935823587485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-76507767527646812812012-01-20T08:16:05.564-05:002012-01-20T08:16:05.564-05:00@Marianne: Thank you:) That's the effect I h...@Marianne: Thank you:) That's the effect I hoped for:)Molly Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01488325587798390008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-57893752929077574302012-01-20T01:09:01.029-05:002012-01-20T01:09:01.029-05:00I can "see" a large dorm room...and all ...I can "see" a large dorm room...and all that goes with it. Natural speech for college students...flow of conversation and description puts the reader in that room with the girls.<br />Nice job!Marianne Stephenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05277593485137508765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-88133100297825688382012-01-19T20:24:35.950-05:002012-01-19T20:24:35.950-05:00@Liz and Jean: Glad you enjoyed the excerpt and t...@Liz and Jean: Glad you enjoyed the excerpt and thank you:) Keri's story was fun to write:)Molly Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01488325587798390008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-56934912125036207112012-01-19T20:23:34.003-05:002012-01-19T20:23:34.003-05:00@Adele: My family has attended the 500 regularly s...@Adele: My family has attended the 500 regularly since 1963; I began going in 1985 and have only missed a few races. My immediate family has discovered it's best to send me, rather than put up with me yelling at the TV, ha ha:)Molly Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01488325587798390008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-72656865818164854292012-01-19T12:03:35.079-05:002012-01-19T12:03:35.079-05:00Love reading excerpts...and congratulations on a n...Love reading excerpts...and congratulations on a new release...jean hart stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12287808234288499369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-7167344086568322482012-01-19T11:37:36.527-05:002012-01-19T11:37:36.527-05:00what a great excerpt...congrats on the upcoming re...what a great excerpt...congrats on the upcoming release!Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15182147051413946727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-89018232112265373032012-01-19T10:48:43.852-05:002012-01-19T10:48:43.852-05:00Good excerpt. I have ties to Indiana, and a soft p...Good excerpt. I have ties to Indiana, and a soft place in my heart for that state. Been to the Indie 500, which was awesome.<br /><br />Best of luck with your releases!<br /><br />~AdeleAdele Duboishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01975297711548126595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-34857978873520859892012-01-19T10:05:36.746-05:002012-01-19T10:05:36.746-05:00@Tina: There are some writers who describe everyt...@Tina: There are some writers who describe everything in vivid detail; I was not blessed with that talent:)<br /><br />@Marika: LOL...I almost posted an Indy 500 excerpt:) But wanted thought people would enjoy the room, rather than pit row:) Maybe next month, hmmmm?Molly Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01488325587798390008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-73482186789007715832012-01-19T09:35:47.720-05:002012-01-19T09:35:47.720-05:00Loved it, loved it. Plus, you had me at the Indy ...Loved it, loved it. Plus, you had me at the Indy 500. :)<br /><br />MarikaHarlie Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01866226921079232570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-57175371086078170812012-01-19T07:05:34.855-05:002012-01-19T07:05:34.855-05:00Enjoyed your excerpt. I love when a novel had rich...Enjoyed your excerpt. I love when a novel had rich descriptive language. Doesn't have to be a lot. Just enough for me to get a sense of place.Tina Donahuehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07160021732404091277noreply@blogger.com