tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post3115583662885822240..comments2024-03-24T13:49:53.099-04:00Comments on Romance Books '4' Us: Showing Emotion On the Page by Janice SeagravesUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-72388826093540337142013-07-28T21:15:45.650-04:002013-07-28T21:15:45.650-04:00Fantastic post!!
Thank you so much for sharing. ...Fantastic post!!<br /><br />Thank you so much for sharing. : )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07425589848803096751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-28207935262823779932013-07-28T14:41:41.183-04:002013-07-28T14:41:41.183-04:00Hi Gemma, It's okay to write a messy first dra...Hi Gemma, It's okay to write a messy first draft full of telly part. You just have to remember when you go through revision to change those party to show the emotions.<br /><br />Hi Rose, Indeed it does pop and pulls the reader in more. Telling keeps the reader at arms length.<br /><br />Hi Kitty, It can be, but its well worth the effort.<br /><br />Janice~Janice Seagraveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02576031935823587485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-17432986661086417272013-07-28T13:15:24.503-04:002013-07-28T13:15:24.503-04:00Awesome post Janice. :)Showing without over descri...Awesome post Janice. :)Showing without over describing is difficult. :)<br />bidelia78@yahoo.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-82025625057682015692013-07-28T08:36:57.648-04:002013-07-28T08:36:57.648-04:00Great blog, Janice. I think showing emotion in a s...Great blog, Janice. I think showing emotion in a story makes it pop! I tend to forget that sometimes. Thanks for the reminder. <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12937328419133796333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-41528681576604301932013-07-27T15:54:27.953-04:002013-07-27T15:54:27.953-04:00Hi Janice, Thanks for this reminder about not tell...Hi Janice, Thanks for this reminder about not telling. It's so easy to fall into the telling trap. When I just need to get the story written, my first draft will often be very telly. Then on draft 2 I take more time to show... wonderful blog post!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10005215075724810989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-31932220117714554282013-07-27T14:36:22.429-04:002013-07-27T14:36:22.429-04:00Hi Tina, Thank you. :)
Hi Melissa, Thank you. :)
...Hi Tina, Thank you. :)<br /><br />Hi Melissa, Thank you. :)<br /><br />Hi Brenna, Thank you. I have to too. I think most authors do.<br /><br />Hi Jean, Thank you. A friend asked me to do this one.<br /><br />Hi Elaine, Thank you. :)<br /><br />Hi Rachel, Thank you. :)<br /><br />Janice~Janice Seagraveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02576031935823587485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-12578643272146756122013-07-27T12:43:53.654-04:002013-07-27T12:43:53.654-04:00Excellent examples, thanks for sharing.
Connie Br...Excellent examples, thanks for sharing.<br /><br />Connie BretesConnie Breteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02688996584220088739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-25182856878689261412013-07-27T12:14:00.179-04:002013-07-27T12:14:00.179-04:00Enjoyed your blog and great examples!
Enjoyed your blog and great examples!<br />Elaine Violettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12965237100099835388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-52291306240922825792013-07-27T11:24:46.159-04:002013-07-27T11:24:46.159-04:00Great blog. Telling is my downfall. Such good exam...Great blog. Telling is my downfall. Such good examples of how not to do so!!!! Thanks.jean hart stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12287808234288499369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-16830719783496344282013-07-27T11:03:20.371-04:002013-07-27T11:03:20.371-04:00Great post, Janice! I have to really work at showi...Great post, Janice! I have to really work at showing emotion on the page. Brenna Chasehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10265076562202518459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-2886917285795782272013-07-27T11:00:49.125-04:002013-07-27T11:00:49.125-04:00Love it Janice! Great post!
Love it Janice! Great post! <br /><br />Melissa Keirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10247037321769755660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5742415355016995707.post-32044822898831569852013-07-27T09:46:00.990-04:002013-07-27T09:46:00.990-04:00Excellent blog, Janice - it's SO hard to show ...Excellent blog, Janice - it's SO hard to show emotion on the page. Sometimes there just doesn't seem to be enough words in the English language. Tina Donahuehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07160021732404091277noreply@blogger.com