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Saturday, March 23, 2013

Guest Blog: Rose Anderson: Coloring Our World with Words



As the story goes, when god spoke to Moses from the burning bush, he revealed his true name. From the moment of man's first inkling of the vast miracle of his own existence, he's tried to put a name to it.  A name is not merely an arbitrary designation or a random combination of sounds. The name conveys the nature and essence of the thing it's been given to. It represents the history and reputation of the thing. But a name by itself just isn't enough somehow. Moses may have been privy to the Name, but everyone else added the adjectives – all-seeing, loving, vengeful, benevolent, and almighty are just a few.

In school, we were taught to avoid overusing flowery language because too many adjectives and adverbs can ruin the reading experience. Well sure, I can see that. When the writer expounds for the sake of expounding, the reader's brain has trouble making sense of it all.
Victorian writer and shameless expounder, George Bulwer-Lytton, left a few memorable tidbits behind. Example: This well-known opener – It was a dark and stormy night...

Funny how no one ever mentions the rest:
It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets, for it is in London that our scene lies, rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness.

A century later Ernest Hemingway might have taken a stab at it like so:
After dark a storm came, and sometimes in the wind there was a noise on the rooftops. You could see the streetlamps struggling to stay lit.

A half century more and Cormac McCarthy might have a go:
Nights dark beyond darkness and the days more gray each one than what had gone before. Like the onset of some cold glaucoma dimming away the world. The blackness he woke to on those nights was sightless and impenetrable. A blackness to hurt your ears with listening. No sound but the wind in the bare and blackened trees.

My mind has this ability to add and extrapolate. In Bulwer-Lytton’s description I can feel the wind but also see scraggly city trees bending from the force. Backlit by the flames of flickering light, I see the slanted rain streaks on the street lamps’ glass panels and see shop shingles flapping like wooden flags. Over all that, I can imagine a dirty, sooty, 1830’s London with poor and ragged souls chilled to their marrow and hovering in doorways. Cloaked and sodden, they turn their backs to the cold and heavy rain.

In Hemmingway’s version I see an overall mild storm with the occasional gust that wants to extinguish the lamps. My mind doesn’t care to fill in or extrapolate here.

Even without the rain and gust-dimmed lights, in McCarthy’s few lines I see desolation. Again, the words are so tight, the image so compact, my imagination says “OK, enough. I see it.”

I’m ok with all three but you can guess the one my imagination prefers – George Bulwer-Lytton’s.
I find adjectives and adverbs to be life’s jumbo box of crayons, you know, the super-sized box with the built-in sharpener on the back. These modifiers express feelings both physical and emotional. They give a reference point to interpret with. They describe and evoke. But most of all, they lend a tangible quality to the names of things. They color our world. My mind needs adjectives because I see and hear and feel the colors, textures, sounds, and beauty of life. I need them because I have feelings, and one size does not fit all.

These thoughts came to me today, surrounded as I am with grey. A heavy snowstorm a week ago now sublimates into a dense hazy fog. I see bare patches of brown grass in spots on the lawn that inexplicably cleared before the rest. I’ve lived here long enough to know who and what comes first in the spring. First on the scene – my snowdrops have pushed their heads out of the half-frozen ground to soak up the sunlight. I heard my first robin this morning. I saw my first chickadee yesterday. Spring is ready to burst into song, and opening day is just around the corner.

I’m a three-season person. Summer can stay in the south where it belongs, I’d happily enjoy spring, fall and winter without it. Coming to understand myself, I realize one of the reasons I love these three seasons, is the sense of expectation they give. Summer really holds no expectations for me, other than three months of hot and buggy. Fall has the hunkering-down excitement of everything preparing for winter. And winter in the upper Midwest has the grab-bag of weather. The ever-tricksey Lake Michigan can throw a weather curveball like nobody’s business. From deep snows to ice storms it’s like Forrest Gump’s box of chocolates – you never know what you’ll get. But spring is when life stirs and everything starts anew. The whole of nature trembles in anticipation and determines to get its show on the road.

Aside from enjoying how the season unfolds, I love the many colors and sounds of spring. A few short weeks from today, I know I’ll hear a bluebird across the road calling the attention of a nearby female. I can almost see him in my mind’s eye – his downy breast a softly muted shade that turns bright blue at just the right angle. Outside my window, a cardinal will sit in the cedar with his vibrant red plumage. As long as I’m talking descriptors, I must mention his song. The only way to describe that sound is sweet – a rich sweetness that makes your heart ache just a little to hear it, because it’s that beautiful.

Of all the spring colors, I have to say green stands head and shoulders above the rest. This isn’t a generic monotone color. Oh no, far more descriptors are needed here. The range and scope of spring green needs as many as language and imagination allow. In spring, one must spell Green with a capital G.

If I gave an April tour of spring green in my yard, this is what I’d see:
The newly budded weeping willow tree whips will have filled with running sap and turned a yellowish-green. They’re also nubby with unsheathed catkins, each of which has the slightest reddish tinge. Hosta lily spikes of numerous varieties jut up from the ground in clumps and are mostly white-tipped emerald or jade. Lacy bleeding hearts will appear and their stems are a plump hunter green shot with dark crimson edges. Vibrant yellow daffodils have thick kelly-green spikes. (I must add another adjective here – succulent.) Spring cedar growth is dark, almost a shade of olive, but where the squirrels have been stealing bark for their nests, I’ll see the yellow-gold cambium layer exposed in strips that run in long lengths up the trunks. After all these years the trees seem to take this vernal pillaging in stride.

The oak flowers in their spring emergence are not quite as yellow as the willow. The small bit of umber and brick red interspersed throughout tend to play a trick on the eye unless you purposely look for the green. Any spring rain will darken the bur oak’s corky bark. Each tree would be riddled light and dark with damp and dry places. Spring rains will also waken the pubescent moss and lacy-edged lichen of sea green that innocently grow all over the trunks and wait patiently for summer’s leafy shade. After 200 years, I do believe the oaks could care less.

By far, the most green comes from the lawn. As my house is surrounded by rolling fields, the lawn stretches as far as the eye can see. In a matter of weeks, I'll look out on a dew-kissed morning and imagine I’m in Ireland because the whole of it will be dressed in emerald green. It will stay that way until yellow dandelions take over. Then the mature grass gets so tall it goes to seed and bends under its burden. That changes the color dramatically – more of a silver green. The crabgrass and fescue are darker and thicker, more of a teal green. The small clovers and tiny weeds have their own variations on the theme. Slender blades, newly sliced through the topsoil are the faintest and purest of all the greens in my backyard. Describing the green of my lawn is a hard one because all the many shades collectively defy description. There just aren’t enough words for the job.

George Bulwer-Lytton could have run with this. Cormac McCarthy could certainly describe the emotion of the colors here. I think it might be lost on Hemingway. Or maybe he'd just keep it to himself.

BLURB: The Witchy Wolf and the Wendigo: (Book Two Eluwilussit)

An ancient hatred seethes in pastoral Wisconsin. Denied access to the White spirit world of the ancestors, ancient shaman Eluwilussit finds himself in the Red Realm and receives a terrible gift from the forsaken spirits dwelling there. Blaming Ash for this misfortune, as well as Aiyanna’s death, he vows to be rid of the other shaman once and for all.

Meanwhile, Ash declares his love to Livie and reveals the truth of his existence as a Witchy Wolf. Warned that Eli comes for him, Ash sends Livie north to the reservation hoping John’s family will keep her safe. In the inevitable confrontation to come, either one shape-shifter will live, or both shall die.

BIO:
I love words and choose them as carefully as an artist might choose a color. My active imagination compels me to write everything from children’s stories to historical nonfiction. As a persnickety leisure reader, I especially enjoy novels that feel like they were written just for me. It's hard to explain, but if you've ever read one of those, then you know what I mean. I tend to sneak symbolism and metaphor into my writing. You might say it's a game I play with myself when I write. And I so love when readers email to say they've found something. I’d like people to feel my stories were written just for them, for that’s the truth. These hidden insights are my gift to my readers.

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19 comments:

Melissa Keir said...

I love the flowery words and am a little over the top with them in my writing, not that I terrify my readers but I want to entice all their senses!

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

Thanks for stopping Melissa. I could certainly go over the top too. I love prose in romance and must rein myself in constantly! Romance and poetic words go hand in hand.

Rose

Katalina Leon said...

Wonderful post Rose. I enjoyed going back to read the examples a couple of times. It's interesting to see how much writing styles have changed over time.

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

Thanks Katalina. A reviewer once praised my writing as a throwback to old style romanticism. I like romances that make your heart flutter with possibility. :)

Rose

Jane Leopold Quinn said...

It's really hard to know when to quit with the adjectives and adverbs in writing. If you read aloud your sentences, I think you'll know what's enough in the description. But I'm with you, I like a fully realized scene that sets the stage for the entrance of the characters.

Good post!

J.D. Faver said...

Wonderful post, Rose. The more I read of your novels and your thoughts, the more you reveal your true romantic nature. Thanks for sharing with us. I've been communing with nature lately and you put into words all that I feel.
*hugs*
~JD

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

Thanks for stopping Jane and June. Like you, I too enjoy descriptions that allow me to absorb the scene. A few years ago, I read Pillars of the Earth by Ken Follett. There was a point where I actually smelled the scene he'd written. Talk about total immersion!

:) Yes, I have a romantic heart. I hope my readers fall in love right along with my characters.

Rose

Nicole Morgan said...

Oh I loved this post, Rose! So in tune with what I struggle with sometimes myself. Great job! Thanks for sharing it!

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

Thanks Nicole. :) It's nice to know I'm not alone in reining myself in. The thing is, as a reader I enjoy the extra descriptors! What a tightrope walk.

Rose

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

Thanks to RB4U for hosting me today!
:)
Rose

Cara Marsi said...

What a beautiful post. You put me right in your yard. Such beautiful descriptions. I have The Witch and the Wendigo in my Kindle. It sounds really good, and I can't wait to read it.

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

Thanks Cara! If you like lush descriptions, I'm sure you'll enjoy that one. I studied hands-on Native American lifeways many years ago and the man who taught them to me was from the northern reservation I refer to in the story. Many of the scenarios I mention in both books are actually slices of real happenings in his life there, as well as our experiences together. Thanks again. :)

Rose

Gemma Juliana said...

I too love flowery words, adverbs, adjectives and all that. As you can imagine I have to harness myself when it comes to self-editing!

Wonderful blog post, Rose. Deep insights. Thanks for sharing!

Gemma Juliana

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

Thanks Gemma!

Jenny Twist said...

At last! Someone talking common sense about adjectives.
In an attempt to rid the world of purple prose, the vast majority of editors, critique writers and creative writing classes are attempting to expunge all 'unnecessary' words from the language. The ultimate result will be that we all just write lists. Let us rise up and revolt against this ignorant iconoclasm before it destroys everything that is beautiful and good in our language.

LizB said...

Language is the food of writers, and it's hard when you have to withhold yourself from gorging on words. It's interesting how the craft develops.
I'm revising my early books for ebook release and I find I'm much more picky about language. I craft words with more care than I used to, although I write faster. Weird. I've certainly had to expunge unnecessary waffle, mainly saying more than I need - one has to trust the reader.
But I'm not an advocate for removing every adverb and adjective. Spare writing, sometimes stark, suits some stories. Others demand more.
Interesting post and comments, Rose.
Liz

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

lol yes Jenny, you lead the charge and I'll be right behind you! We see exactly this in some of the popular books out right now. Sentences trimmed to the bone with nothing for the reader's imagination to grasp. Personally, I don't want to write disposable twitter-ized sentences for the backs of cereal boxes. I want to create lasting literature. Thanks for stopping by. :)

And Liz, yes, sometimes stories demand more for the telling. Thanks for stopping by. :)

Rose

Linda McLaughlin said...

I love well-written description, but it's not my strongest point. I do think the romance and fantasy/paranormal genres lend themselves more to a rich palette of words, where action/adventure and mysteries need more sparse prose. One size definitely doesn't fit all when it comes to writing.

It sounds like you live in a beautiful area of the country, Rose. I grew up in PA but live in So. Calif now and everything is more likely to be brown than green, esp. when we have a dry year like this one. I miss autumn in the east like crazy. But like you, summer can just stay away. :)

Rose Anderson ~ Romance Novelist said...

I've visited all over the country but have always been a Midwestern girl. Give me three defined seasons (preferably with a short mild summer) and I'm happiest. I took in the fall colors of the east coast in 2012. Linda, I can certainly understand how you'd miss it,! The autumn foliage was amazing. Thanks for stopping.
Rose

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